Ben Brown 17- sik film man, love the story line and their different views on what they both think and using the handheld camera was good touch making it seem more like a point of view shot innit.
The only thing is that you can kinda hear when u are starting and stopping the voice recorder with the voice overs. you need some criticisms nice work thou mate
Callum Mclean 18 - I'd already read your screenplay so the concept wasn't a surprise, but realised it worked even better than I had anticipated, I thought it was the perfect form for a student film. You guys didn't attempt anything over-ambitious, it was a charming snippet of teenage innocence with some kinda profound undertones. ... See moreI liked the end, in that you didn't milk the sadness, it stayed light-hearted in a way. Excellent acting guys, was chmiel even playing a different character? :)
Abi Walker 17 - the repeated pattern thing but with different views. so nicely done and written :). loved the music in the background too. The only thing i would say is sometimes the sound seemed to cut out. but it was amazingly directed. seriously. impressive.
love it.
Callum Mclean 18 - I'd already read your screenplay so the concept wasn't a surprise, but realised it worked even better than I had anticipated, I thought it was the perfect form for a student film. You guys didn't attempt anything over-ambitious, it was a charming snippet of teenage innocence with some kinda profound undertones. ... See moreI liked the end, in that you didn't milk the sadness, it stayed light-hearted in a way. Excellent acting guys, was chmiel even playing a different character? :)
Abi Walker 17 - the repeated pattern thing but with different views. so nicely done and written :). loved the music in the background too. The only thing i would say is sometimes the sound seemed to cut out. but it was amazingly directed. seriously. impressive.
love it.
Tahsina Rahman 17 - The framing, plot, editing and use of non diagetic sound is very good! Great work guys :D
James Bourn 24 - i liked the camera work and editing the best! good use of voice over guys well done.
Joe Merrion 16 - Really good people, good editing, scene change, filming, camera angles, quality of film and theme selection. However one criticism could be that the sound should be polished a bit more as the sound cut out every now and then. Otherwise well done x
James Bourn 24 - i liked the camera work and editing the best! good use of voice over guys well done.
Joe Merrion 16 - Really good people, good editing, scene change, filming, camera angles, quality of film and theme selection. However one criticism could be that the sound should be polished a bit more as the sound cut out every now and then. Otherwise well done x
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