Shot List

Shot list

Straight cut. Close up of her face looking at writing and smiling. Shaky. ‘neither could I. It didn’t matter…’ (8 secs)

C Fade cut. Long shot of Chmiel playing bass (sitting in bimm room?) ‘there’s just something about him.’ (6 secs)

C Straight cut. Extreme close ups of his fingers playing, quick cuts (fades)? (4 secs)

C Fade cut back to park, medium long shot as before, they sit down on a bench, camera pans and tilts to follow. He leans and kisses her on the cheek. ‘We’ve been going out ages…like 2 months at least.’ (10 secs) – 1 minute

C Fade cut to group of friends talking from before. His friends nudge him and point, he turns and looks at her (shaky pan to her, smiling). ‘It took me a while to notice her, but my friends were so jealous that she liked me.’ Pan back to male group, friends raise their eyebrows and shake heads.’ (12 secs)

C ‘Apparently she was something special’. Medium of Kate laughing in her group. Pos slow motion? (5 secs)

C Fade back to park. ‘I know that he isn’t perfect.’ Getting up from bench long shot. Start walking. (4 secs)

C Straight Cut. Smoking area. Close up of Chmiel putting cigarette in his mouth and lighting it. Change of d.o.f. half way through ‘He smokes.’ (4 secs)

C Straight Cut. Chmiel’s kitchen. Close up pan and tilt following him taking piece of pizza from box, stuffing it in his mouth. ‘Eats A LOT.’ Sped up shots of him taking piece after piece until box is empty. Last shot was pos slow motion ECU on Chmiel’s mouth. (10 secs)

C Medium close up of Chmiel asleep in bed (snoring his face off) and Kate lying next to him covering her ears and looking traumatised. ‘Snores’ pans down the bed to…

C Close up of Chmiel’s feet coming out the end of a bed, wearing HORRID socks. ‘And he wears socks in bed.’ (12 secs)

C Back to park, getting up and walking away, this time camera is in front of them. She’s chatting away, he’s looking uninterested ‘But I don’t mind, to me, he is perfect.’ ‘She’s perfect…’ (10 secs)

C Same shot as before in the smoking area, Chmiel lights a cigarette, but with Kate in the background smiling. Static. ‘She doesn’t care about the cigarettes.’ (5 secs) – 2 minutes

C In Chmiel’s Kitchen, Kate takes one slice of pizza and puts it on her plate. Close up pan and tilt. ‘She always lets me have the most.’ (4 secs)

C (Something about being amazing in bed) Medium shot, very high angle shot of Chmiel looked very pleasured

C Medium close up in bed, Kate asleep, Chmiel looking at her ‘ And she’s beautiful’ (5 secs)

C Back to park, they reach the camera, and walk past, Chmiel has concerned look on his face while Kate is still smiling and chatting away. ‘So why haven’t I fallen for her?’ (7 secs)

C Kate in common room ELS then shaky zoom to MLS, people walking past in front of camera.

C CU over shoulder of Kate’s note pad covered in I love Tom!

C Corridor near common room Chmiel and mates walking with mates. Tracking shot from behind him.

C Switch to over way as he turns round. See the girl wink as he walks by and he turns round to give her a second look over.

C Long shot of the ugly couple sitting on sofa!

C Close up of Kate looking up at him.

C POV low angle close up on Chmiel not moving.

C Long shot of her getting up, stays on him.

C Her in bathroom looking in mirror. Over shoulder shot with kate in the right hand of the frame. (sighs)

C Straight cut to him, close up in left side of frame finishing sigh.

C SC back to her. ‘I can do this..I—

C SC back to him ‘can do this. It shouldn’t be—

C SC back to her ‘this hard. (sigh) I—

C SC back to him ‘Let’s—

C SC back to her ‘Love—

C SC back to him ‘Break—

C SC back to her ‘You—

C SC back to him ‘Up.’

C SC back to her. She quickly fiddles with her hair and makeup and smiles.

C She comes back in, camera tracks behind as she opens door (shaky) Voiceover = ‘Shit, shit’

C Over shoulder shot of him watching her come in (shaky) Voiceover = ‘Shit.’

C Original long shot of them sitting on sofa. Couple of seconds of awkward sitting, both straight up, not looking at each other.

C Medium close up (2-shot) of them in the same position, sitting next to each other. They both turn and take an in-breath to indicate they’re about to speak.

C Straight cut to black. Credits.